我的情况跟你很像，我也是高三的. 25分的作文能拿十几分，我觉得你应该是用到了一定的高中语法和句式，但也许不够复杂.多使用复杂的文法会成为高考英文写作之得分亮点. 最关键一点是行文逻辑连贯，就是句子句子之间，段落段落之间的连贯，这要使用一定的衔接技巧，想做到这一点，说实话，有一点难度，但一旦做到了，21分以上没问题，我们老师说的.我写作一般也是18,19分，文法也比较复杂，错误不多，但我老师经常说我的行文略显松散，所以分数一直不高.当然， 我也建议你在读任何文章的时候注意把握文章的主题脉络和思维逻辑的变换，并且在这方面多跟老师交流. 你可以不用背范文， 但我觉得你最好还是记住一些行文衔接句式， 这个你们老师应该会讲到的. 希望这些能帮到你，很高兴为你解答.。
Dear John,Things are fine here. I finished my mid-term exams last week, and I got my report card today. My math teacher said I was hard-working. I am happy to hear that. My Chinese teacher said I was good at writing and my English teacher told me that I did well in listening. As for my physics, I had a really hard time with it this semester. But my physics teacher said I could do better. I agree.What about you? Write to me soon.Yours,Mike。
