怎么写高考英语作文

如何写出英语作文得分的“亮点” 以下几种手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法，也是得高分的“亮点”。

1. 改变句子的开头方式，不是一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词作状语等。

试比较： （原文） My brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle the other day. （修正） The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. （原文） The young man couldn't help crying when he heard the bad news. （修正） Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn't help crying. 2. 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装句、省略句等。例如： （1）强调句 （原文） The dog has saved my little sister bravely. （修正） It is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely. (2)主从复合句 （原文） We had to stand there to catch the offender. （修正） What we had to do was to stand there, trying to catch the offender. (3)分词短语、由with或without引导的短语 （原文） The driver escaped and didn't stop, he left the old man lying on the road. （修正） The driver escaped without stopping, leaving the old man lying on the road. (4)倒装句 （原文） I went to bed at 11:30. （修正） Not until 11:30 did I go to bed. (5)省略句 （原文） While you are crossing the street, you should be careful. （修正） While crossing the street, you should be careful. 3. 通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。

例如： （原文） He stopped us an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender. （修正） He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. （原文） We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. （修正） After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing. 4. 注意连接词与句子的运用。 以2001年高考作文为例，在信的开头，可加上“You want to know something about what is going on in schools in China？”这句话起承上启下的作用，使文章过渡自然；再如，用“What was worse？”引出减负前，晚上还要做作业，就寝时间11:30等要点。

又如，“Now I have more free time。” 可引出减负后的情况。

另外，在信的结尾，可用“How about you? I'm looking forward to hearing from you.”来自然地结束这封信。 5. 使用过渡词语。

写好了每个句子，并不一定就是一篇好文章，因为作为一篇文章，还必须行文连贯。那么，如何使文章行文连贯呢？这就要求我们在组成篇章时，要用好过渡性词语，过渡性词语就像是我们组装机械时使用的润滑剂一样，起着润滑的作用。

常用的过渡词语主要有： 并列递进：and, also, as well as, besides, what's more, furthermore, moreover, etc. 转折：but, yet, however, although, nevertheless, in spite of, after all, etc. 因果：because, as, for, since, for this reason, because of, so, therefore, thus, as a result, etc. 对比：or, otherwise, like, unlike, on the contrary, while, on the other hand, instead of, etc. 总结：in all, in brief, on the whole, in short, in general, in one word, etc. 高考英语作文模板：议论文的框架（1） 不同观点列举型（ 选择型 ） There is a widespread concern over the issue that __作文题目_____. But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person. A majority of people think that _ 观点一________. In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows: in the first place， ___原因一_______.Furthermore, in the second place， ___原因二_____. So it goes without saying that ___观点一_____. People, however, differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that ___观点二_______. In their point of view, on the one hand， ___原因一_______. On the other hand， ____原因二_____. Therefore, there is no doubt that ___观点二______. As far as I am concerned, I firmly support the view that __观点一或二______. It is not only because ________, but also because _________. The more _______, the more ________. (2)利弊型的议论文Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)___作文题目______. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in __题目议题_____. Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly， ___优点一______. And secondly ___优点二_____. Just As a popular saying goes, "every coin has two sides"， __讨论议题______ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with， ___缺点一______. In addition， ____缺点二______. To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of __讨论议题____ into full play, and reduce the disadvantagesto the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the ____讨论议题___.（ 3 ）。

看到上面的回答，你估计也很头大吧，至少我现在我看到这么多条条框框我都受不了了

下面是我英语作文没有下过20分的原因，仅供参考，我说的都是从实际出发，并没有引用别人的，都是我在一次次和老师聊天中，老师所说的，毕竟他参加过好几次高考的英语改卷，因此还是比较有效的

首先我们要知道一件事：高考改卷的时间非常有限，几乎要不了一分钟你的作文成绩就下来了，因此第一感觉非常重要。

其实想写好高考英语作文很简单，1是字体好看不要犯简单的错误，2尽量使用有些难度的复合句，特别是第一句话很重要，建议用定语、状语重句或者强调句开场。

这样会给人一种高水平的感觉，只要第一感觉有了，分数也自然上去了，在考试中写错了不要紧，只能用笔在上面清清的划道斜线 但是要注意不要影响到卷面的清洁度 我建议你先打个草稿，用自己能看动的字体飞速的写好 然后重新修改一下 最后再抄到卷面上 虽然有点费时 但是你的英语字体工整卷面干净 可以至少多拿3分 这是我多年的经验 按照这中方法 你必须练英语字体 尽量优美点 开头再配上一个复杂点的句子 只要后面再出现3个复合句并且没有错句和表达意思上的错误出现 整体绝对在20分以上 我可以保证

The Internet and Our LifeThere is a big influence of technique on our daily life. Electronic devices, multimedia and computers are things we have to deal with everyday.Especially the Internet is becoming more and more important for nearly everybody as it is one of the newest and most forward-looking media and surely “the” medium of the future.Therefore we thought that it would be necessary to think about some good and bad aspects of how this medium influences us, what impacts it has on our social behaviour and what the future will look like.The Internet changed our life enormously, there is no doubt about that. There are many advantages of the Internet that show you the importance of this new medium. What I want to say is that Internet changed our life in a positive way. First we have to make a differentiation concerning the usage. You can use the Internet at home for personal or you at work for professional usage. Let's come to the first. To spend a part of our day on the Internet is for many people quite normal. They use this kind of medium to get information about all kinds topics. Maybe some of them are interested in chatting, probably they are members of a community. Whatever you are looking for, you will find it. Even if you want to have very specific information, you will find it in a short time. Normally, you often have to send a letter, than you have to wait for the reception of the reply, or you have to make some telephone calls and so on. In any case, the traditional way is the longer one. To put your own information on the Internet is also possible. Create your own homepage, tell other users about your interests, what you want, that's no problem at all.As we all know, software costs a lot, if you buy it legal. Free software, free music is available on the Internet. You just have to download the program, the mp3-file or whatever and that's it. Why do you want to pay more as you need to? Special websites are created just to give you the newest programs, or to tell you where you can get it from. Napster might actually be the most famous one.The computer is a fix part of every modern office and the greatest part has also an access to the Internet. Companies already present their products, their services on the Internet and so they get more flexible. The next advantage I want to mention is the faster development. Many universities and research institutions are also linked. They are able to exchange experiences, novelties and often they start new projects together. If they are linked, they can save time and money.Especially at the business sector knowledge is power. If you are the leader of a product, of a technology or just of an idea you are able to make a lot of money. To get into this position, the Internet can play an essential part. Companies all over the world are online. If you want, it is no problem for you to exchange experiences, you will hear new things, you will see some facts from another point of view. For this reason you will find new solutions, new ways to go, so take this chance!“Learning by doing”, everybody knows this phrase and its still an essential part concerning the Internet. Children also use the Internet, most of the time they will “play” over the Internet, but they learn to work with the computer. There is only one way to learn something, you have to do it. Even it's the first contact with the computer, after a few minutes the person will know that the computer-mouse is no animal running on the monitor. He or she learns to write on the keyboard, to navigate, to open and close programs, to save data。

within hours. Try to do that on a normal computer course for beginners, you will need more time and the most important fact, it's not as funny as surfing on the Internet and so they participants are less motivated. Let's change over to another positive effect of the Internet.In any case, everybody's private situation is different. For many women their own children are the main reason for staying at home. Nowadays this won't be a problem any more, you can do work on your computer at home, called tele-working. Also men take this opportunity to work at home. What are the consequences, the advantages of tele-working? Sure, if you have a family, you can spend more time at home, probably you can spend more time with your children. Next is, that you can organize every day in the way you want to. Meetings at the company are reduced to a minimum. Tele-working is also an advantage for the owner of the company. Official studies substantiate that people who work at home are more motivated than their colleagues at the office. . You see, the Internet is really a very positive medi。

我们几年前读高中的时候老师曾经说错三个单词扣1分，错三个语法扣1分，这都属于硬件因素，如果你只能拿一半的分，这方面应该也构成了其一的因素，先把你考过的试卷拿出来看看.平时背单词的时候一定要背死，不确定的长单词不要用，宁愿简单也不要为了秀词汇量而不小心出错.划不来

二，如果解决了硬件障碍的话你的分数应该也上来了不少了，现在就是软件问题，也就是所谓的句子和文章的结构问题，其实我们的高中还基本上应试成分浓厚.

首先，你要咨询老师所谓的作文框架，把他当八股一样的套用，毕竟框架是老师的第一印象，没有好的框架，老师的感觉就是你根本不懂英文作文，对你的内容质疑度会很大（框架可以精确到写几段，这几段分别写几句，用几句长句几句短句等等）

其次，把好的架子打好了，就是句子的运用了，你背几句摸版句型，网上应该有搜，无论什么题目的首句都可以用的那种，还要记得多背几个连词，象 MOREOVER,AS LONG AS , FIRST OF ALL,SECONDLY,LAST BUT NOT LEAST，评分老师一眼扫过去多有档次，分数还能不乖乖的划给你吗~~

总结一下就是平时单词语法背死，弄清楚写作框架，记几个好句子，考场上宁愿用最简单的东西来表达思想也尽量不范单词语法的错，扔几个好句子大版的漂亮连词，剩下的内容你自己差不多都没什么要写的了，字数有限制，所以你的基础就算不是超级优秀也会被那些背的好句好连词掩饰过去，~~~

记住，我们的目标就是在作文考试的几十分钟坚持不犯错误~~

高中的作文目的性比较强，只需要先总结出中文意思，然后翻译就行.但是有个问题就是那个一句中文我们估计得用好几句英文去翻译，有时候甚至还翻译不出来，这就需要平时的积累了.所以平时需要被多记一些句型和短语.我看你上面说的平时写作业的时候用了很多句型，我想知道的是那些是你自己写的还是是你在哪篇文章中看到的然后找到它抄了过来.我上高中的时候每天早上背诵一篇英文短文并且默写，背诵的目的是记住，默写的目的是为了把那些句子变成是自己的.有些东西多背几遍就行，并且要随时复习 直到变成是你自己的话.如果怕记不住我告诉你一个便捷的方法.一天记一个好的句型.然后这周所有的作文都用到它，然后每周复习一次.我想你就可以记住了，彻底把那些句子当成是自己的。

我的情况跟你很像，我也是高三的. 25分的作文能拿十几分，我觉得你应该是用到了一定的高中语法和句式，但也许不够复杂.多使用复杂的文法会成为高考英文写作之得分亮点. 最关键一点是行文逻辑连贯，就是句子句子之间，段落段落之间的连贯，这要使用一定的衔接技巧，想做到这一点，说实话，有一点难度，但一旦做到了，21分以上没问题，我们老师说的.我写作一般也是18,19分，文法也比较复杂，错误不多，但我老师经常说我的行文略显松散，所以分数一直不高.当然， 我也建议你在读任何文章的时候注意把握文章的主题脉络和思维逻辑的变换，并且在这方面多跟老师交流. 你可以不用背范文， 但我觉得你最好还是记住一些行文衔接句式， 这个你们老师应该会讲到的. 希望这些能帮到你，很高兴为你解答.。

08四川 What can I do for our environment? Everyone can do something for our environment. For me, I should try to save electricity in my daily life. For example, if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening, I will always remember to turn off the lights. In order to protect our forests, I will use paper wisely. I should try to use both sides of paper whenever it is possible. I will not use things like paper cups and disposable chopsticks because they are made of wood. I believe that doing all these small things will improve our environment and help make our world a better place to live in. 08陕西Notice Our monitor suggests that we have “Friday News Hour”. But some classmates do not agree. We will have a class meeting in English tomorrow afternoon to discuss this suggestion. Please prepare your talk and take an active part. May 6th, 2008 Dear fellow students, Our monitor suggests that we have “Friday New Hour”. I think that it is a good idea. Everyone knows that we are busy all day. Seldom do we know what is happening both at home and abroad, let alone what we can do for our country. By reading newspapers we can get more information about the world outside. So I think “Friday New Hour” can broaden our mind and enrich our school life. What's more, it will help us improve our reading skills. As for my suggestion, I think it's better to have it twice a week. And we should make a choice about what we'll read. I am sure everyone will benefit a lot from this activity. 08福建Dear sir, I'm Li Hua from Fujian. When I was reading the advertisement , the aim of this activity impressed me greatly, I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation. As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12, I think it is a kind or win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation. I am looking forward to your early reply. Sincerely yours, Li Hua 08安徽Dear David, I'm glad that you've noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. Thank you for your concern. As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our govenment encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. Besides, they can be reused. More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them. I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are to make our country an even cleaner place. Yours, Li Hua 08湖南Sample 1: Thomas Edison Born in American, Thomas Edison was a great scientist and inventor. He once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination. I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1000 inventions. In his little time, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Meio Park”. He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many inventions. What impresses me most is his famous saying, “genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration”. Probably I cannot be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when and where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life. Sample 2: Helen Keller Every time I read “…if I had the power of sight for three days;, I cannot help being moved by its author Helen Keller, an ordinary but great American woman. I admire Helen because she is optimistic about life. She became deaf and blind when she was 19 months old. Since then she lived in a world of darkness and silence, and communication seemed only a dream for her. But she never gave up and struggled to lead an active life. Under the guidance of her teacher, Ms. Sulliven, Helen learned to read and write, and became a famous writer. For a disabled person like her, this was really a wonder. Helen has set an excellent example to all of us. Her story tells us that we should value what we have and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life. Sample 3: William Shakespeare Do you know Hamlet? Have you read the Merchant of Venice? 。